I am a Year 7 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Ms Kirpatrick and Mrs Anderson.
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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Tuesday, 20 December 2016
United Arab Emirates (Summer Learning Journey)
Today I am doing the Summer Learning Journey. This is my first Blog Post of one of the Activities I have done.The first reason why I chose the Country United Arab Emirates was because I have always wanted to visit places and landmarks in the United Arab Emirates. I have always wanted to visit Dubai and Abu Dhabi.The Second Reason why I chose United Arab Emirates was because I have always wanted to learn about the United Arab Emirates Culture,Food,Traditions and Etc.
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Reading,
Summer Learning Journey,
Writing
Friday, 2 December 2016
Conclusion for Jean batten
This is my Writing Must do for this Week. I wrote my Conclusion by my self it was very easy. I all so did the brainstorming by my self.
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Writing
Friday, 25 November 2016
Introduction on Jean Batten
This week for my Writing Must do.I had to go on Coggle and make a Brainstorm on a Aviatrix.I chose Jean Batten.I had to do an Introduction on Jean Batten it was very Easy.
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Writing
Friday, 11 November 2016
SALF of a Explanation text
This is my Must do for this Week.It is my Writing Must do.I did this all bye my self it was very easy.
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Writing
Sunday, 30 October 2016
The Haunted House - Editing
The Haunted House
On a Cold Stiff Night at 6:00 the sun visited her friend’s House. Kaitlyn’s Friend’s said, Do you guys wanna check out the Haunted House. Kaitlyn said no way,that place is too Scary. Kaitlyn ’s friends said come on Kaitlyn .
Kaitlyn said fine but I'm not going Going Alone. They told their Moons, That they would come back in 40 Minutes. And then they all went into the Wood’s. They saw a Sign say River’s and Haunted House. They took the Haunted house way.There was a sign on the Door, That said do not enter but they did. They were all walking until a Scary Clown, popped and they all Screamed ahhhh.
They saw Lightning and Storms Everywhere. Kaitlyn’s friend’s,were scared like a bat running from a predator.They kept on walking and then they found a room, that said do not enter.They entered and then they turned the light on, And saw that the room was full of clown’s and Games that were Extinct . “Bang” a Clown box fall down.
Monday, 24 October 2016
The Haunted House
L.I: to use a variety of simple, compound, and complex sentences. S.C: I can use a minimum of five simple sentences, 3 compound and 4 complex sentences
This is my Must do T4W2 Mr Wong said we had to edit our Writing into Simple,Complex and Compound Sentence's. The Yellow stand's for Simple Sentence's,The Green Stands's for Compound and the Purple stand's for Complex Sentence's.
This is my Must do T4W2 Mr Wong said we had to edit our Writing into Simple,Complex and Compound Sentence's. The Yellow stand's for Simple Sentence's,The Green Stands's for Compound and the Purple stand's for Complex Sentence's.
Thursday, 13 October 2016
Haunted House - Editing into Paragraph's
L.I: to write narrative paragraphs using Topic sentence, Details, Concluding sentence.Today for Writing Mr Wong's Group's worked with Mrs McClain because He's not here. Tika Maui worked on Narrative Paragraph's We had to rewrite our Story from Week 9 Term 3 into paragraphs using a topic sentence, details and concluding sentence.We had to take a Screenshot before we edited our Writing and After.
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Paragraph's,
Writing
Friday, 23 September 2016
Haunted House
The Haunted House
On a Cold Stiff Night at 6:00 Kaitlyn visited her friend’s House. Kaitlyn’s Friend’s said do you guys wanna check out the Haunted House. Kaitlyn said no way that place is too Scary. Kaitlyn ’s friends said come on Kaitlyn .
Kaitlyn said fine but I'm not going Going Alone. They told their Mum’s that they come back in 40 Minutes. And then they all went into the Wood’s. They saw a Sign say River’s and Haunted House. They took the Haunted house way.There was a sign on the Door that said do not enter but they did. They were all walking until a Scary Clown popped and they all Screamed ahhhh.
They saw Bugs and Mosquitoes Everywhere. Kaitlyn’s friend’s did not like the Place.They kept on walking and then they found a room that said do not enter.They entered and then they turned the light on and saw that the room was full of clown’s and Games that were Extinct .
Some of them were popping up and the other’s had a button to press and then it would Laugh. Kaitlyn and her friend’s quickly got out of the Haunted house and popped out a clown Laughing at them.They got out of the Haunted house and saw a sign in the Wood’s that said keep out.They all got so scared that they ran home.
This week for Writing in Tika Maui we had to write a a Narrative.The prompt that I chose was Haunted House. It was fun writing.
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Writing
Friday, 9 September 2016
Procedural Text
This is my Writing Must Do for this Week I am in Mr Ogilvie's. I am in Tika Maui Group we had to write about all the Verb's in a Video we watched Call How to make a Ham and Cheese Sandwhich. Chavda and I worked on this.
Friday, 2 September 2016
Story Cubes
Story Cube ‘s
There was an Alien who ate a Fish ate a Poison apple after got trampled by a sheep an arrow hit the Sheep and a Mysterious person was crossing the Bridge saw a turtle and a Sad Moon.
This is my Story I made with the Story Cube's it was fun to make a Story.
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Can do,
Story Cube's,
Writing
Thursday, 1 September 2016
Can do - Story Starter's
This is my Can do I have done this on Story Starter's were you get a Sentence. And you have to write about it to the person.
Writing DLo
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Language Feature's,
Writing
Friday, 26 August 2016
Poetry
L.I.To use a range of Vocabulary to create a picture's in the reader's head.
SC; Deep Words,Subject or Topic, Feelings,Emotive Language, Character's, Reapeative Language, Place's Rhyme, Different Tenses.
This week for our Writing Must do we had to do a Poem based on the Woods,River,Ocean Etc. I worked with my Group first then we had to do our One this is Mine. We had to use a Noun,Verb,Adjective, and Adverb. A noun is a naming word, A Verb is a Doing word, A Adjective is a Describing Word and a Adverb is a Explaining Word.
Friday, 12 August 2016
Advertising
This week for Writing Mr Wong's writing Groups Must do Task list was that we had to make an Advertisement for Toys. Our group had to plan a layout that had all our language Features. My group picked out the Lego Set. I have a link below to Nyjah's and Angari's Blog.
Angari's Blog Nyjah's Blog
Angari's Blog Nyjah's Blog
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Advertisement,
Writing
Friday, 5 August 2016
Language Features Advertisemant
L.I.How to recognize,and understand the purpose of Advertising (persuasive) Language Features. This past Week Ti Ika e Maui and Aotearoa Group were learning Language Features of Advertisement.It was fun Learning about the Language Features of Advertisement.
Thursday, 7 July 2016
Cheetah Note Taking Sheet
This is my Cheetah Note Taking Sheet for my Information Report. I like the subject about Cheetahs and I know a lot about the subject.
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Writing
Wednesday, 29 June 2016
Information Report about Cranes
Information Report Writing Frame - Animal
Purpose:
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LI - To write an information
report that informs the reader about a XXX.
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TITLE
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Cranes
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INTRODUCTION
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Intro
Cranes fly with their necks outstretched not pulled back.
Cranes are a type of bird that looks alike like flamingos
The scientific name for blue cranes is Anthropoides Paradiseus.
Cranes are found in all continents except Antarctica and South America.
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DESCRIPTION
Paragraph 1
Appearance
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Appearance
Red crowned cranes look like flamingos but their height is different.
Cranes are covered mostly with white feathers except for their red crown ( The neck, legs, and bottom are covered in black feathers. Cranes have long straight beaks.
There are fifteen species of crane in four genera.
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DESCRIPTION
Paragraph 2
Diet
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Diet
Cranes eat a range of food.
Cranes eat a range of items like small rodents,Small fish,Insects,Leaves,seeds and frogs. |
DESCRIPTION
Paragraph 3
Habitat
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Habitat
Cranes live in a variety of places except Antarctica and South America.
Cranes are found in Hokkaido Japan.There are also Cranes in Russia,Korean Peninsula and China. Sandhill cranes spend most of their lives in freshwater wetlands, including marshes, wet grasslands and river basins. Do you think all cranes live in the marshland?
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DESCRIPTION
Paragraph 4
Other (Your choice)
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Description
There are about 15 species of cranes in the world.Red crowned cranes are the second precious cranes living on earth.
In the case of any threat, the females and males cranes call together to defend their territory.The oldest crane that survived for the longest span was the Siberian crane named Wolf. It lived for 83 years.
Scientific Name for Cranes Gruidae
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CONCLUSION:
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Conclusion
Cranes usually swim in summer months although it depends on the kind of species of cranes.
The smallest crane is the Demoiselle Crane, the tallest is Sarus Crane and the heaviest is Red-crowned Cranes.
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This is my Information Report about Cranes I loved working on it it was fun doing an Information Report on Cranes.
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Writing
Friday, 4 March 2016
Narrative Story
Haunted House
Haunted House There was a girl named Kayla and her best friend was Amber. One afternoon Amber came to Kayla's House. Kayla said to her Mum that they were going on a walk. Her Mum said “Come back in 30 minutes”. “Ok” said Kayla. Kayla and Amber went for a walk in the alley way. Then they kept going until Kayla started to notice that they were somewhere they didn't even know. They came to two signs that said woods and river. Kayla and Amber choose to go down the wood's direction. They walked and walked until they saw a Haunted House. Kayla and Amber got closer to the house and saw a sign say that said do not enter. Kayla knocked and knocked but nobody opened the door. Kayla decided they should go in. Amber said “We should not go in because it says that”. Kayla said “There's probably nobody in the house”. “Lets check it out”. “Ok” said Amber. They went inside, they walked closely to each other. They walked and walked, then all of a sudden Amber started to notice that they were going in circles. Kayla and Amber tried to find their way back. They kept walking until a clown popped into her face. The clown laughed while Kayla and Amber were trying to find their way out of this creepy house. They kept running, then another clown popped up and laughed. “Ha, ha, ha” screamed the clown. The clown said “You can't run away from us”. Amber was scared of clowns. Kayla said “Come on, we can get out of here”. They stopped to take a rest and then Amber noticed that they were close to the door. Finally they found the door with a sign on that said “Never come back here again”.The Clowns owned the Haunted House. They were Brothers. Kayla and Amber ran fast like a Cheetah . When they arrived back their faces were pale white. Their Mum said why did you two take so long. Kayla explained the whole story to her mum. Her Mum said ok that explains why you two have took long.
This is my Narrative Story about the Haunted House. I put every thing in a Narrative you Needed.
Haunted House There was a girl named Kayla and her best friend was Amber. One afternoon Amber came to Kayla's House. Kayla said to her Mum that they were going on a walk. Her Mum said “Come back in 30 minutes”. “Ok” said Kayla. Kayla and Amber went for a walk in the alley way. Then they kept going until Kayla started to notice that they were somewhere they didn't even know. They came to two signs that said woods and river. Kayla and Amber choose to go down the wood's direction. They walked and walked until they saw a Haunted House. Kayla and Amber got closer to the house and saw a sign say that said do not enter. Kayla knocked and knocked but nobody opened the door. Kayla decided they should go in. Amber said “We should not go in because it says that”. Kayla said “There's probably nobody in the house”. “Lets check it out”. “Ok” said Amber. They went inside, they walked closely to each other. They walked and walked, then all of a sudden Amber started to notice that they were going in circles. Kayla and Amber tried to find their way back. They kept walking until a clown popped into her face. The clown laughed while Kayla and Amber were trying to find their way out of this creepy house. They kept running, then another clown popped up and laughed. “Ha, ha, ha” screamed the clown. The clown said “You can't run away from us”. Amber was scared of clowns. Kayla said “Come on, we can get out of here”. They stopped to take a rest and then Amber noticed that they were close to the door. Finally they found the door with a sign on that said “Never come back here again”.The Clowns owned the Haunted House. They were Brothers. Kayla and Amber ran fast like a Cheetah . When they arrived back their faces were pale white. Their Mum said why did you two take so long. Kayla explained the whole story to her mum. Her Mum said ok that explains why you two have took long.
This is my Narrative Story about the Haunted House. I put every thing in a Narrative you Needed.
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Writing
Tuesday, 16 February 2016
10 Ways of Being a Successful Learner
This what we have to do to be a Successful Learner. Be organised you have to have everything with you.
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Writing
Monday, 15 February 2016
Analyzing a Narrative
Today in Learning Space 1 we analyzed a Narrative for Writing. We learned that a narrative has a Beginning, Middle and End. The Beginning has a Hook and an Orientation. The Middle has a Problem and the ending has an ending. Setting,Time,Weather and Place. The Characters were Bill, Bob, John and China. The Narrative we worked on today was about going Hiking.
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Writing
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