Recount Scafflod By Nazanin

Beginning - this includes your hook. Start your recount with an exciting beginning that captures your audience interest levels	“Yay”! We are going to Extreme Bowling. It was a day like I”ve never had one in a Million days I felt really  Exciting   I  was so happy that we were going to Extreme Bowling. When we arrived there I was bursting with Joyness. It looked so fun when we went inside. When we were playing there  I heard  music of Joy playing.
Ensure your recount covers the orientation: When, Where, Who, What, Why and How Set your recount out in a clear logical order and in paragraphs Write in the past tense Use lots of adjectives - (describing words) personal thoughts and feelings Language Features such as similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia Use connectives	On a bright and Sunny day I went to Extreme Bowling. We drove  a car  we arrived there at  5: 00 pm. My Two Uncles, Aunty,Little brother and I went. We went to Extreme Bowling and we haven't went there like in 3 months so let's go there and start playing. There were lights that brighten the place up. We wrote our names on the paper and we  choosed to play one game.  We got  the shoes and put them on our feet we wear socks with them. We went to Extreme Bowling at Botany. When we started to play I was winning and the other members of my family were  losing  I was  getting yellow light balls so it doesn't go the wrong direction.  I liked playing Extreme Bowling it was so fun playing that when it was my turn kept getting strikes. When it was my uncle  turn he keeps on winning because he comes here all lot. And when he went to Aussie he went to Extreme bowling in Sydney. When we  were playing and we were up to the last round I was happy as a clam. Then  It was my turn and I lost but It was still a good game. My uncle won the whole game he was the one who got the most points. When we finished the game we played Fruit Ninja. We got the Extreme  bowling cards and we scanned it and started to play We got 14 tickets and we only need to get  another 6 to get a car. When we played the helicopter game it was my uncle and brother that was playing we just watched. After I played the Fruit Ninja Game I was happy as if  wanted to chase a cheetah. After we finished playing Extreme Bowling we went to Oportos we bought 3 medium Burgers, 4 large Burgers,  5 Medium fries, and we got 2 l&amp ‘s  and 2 Fanta’s  and it only costed $20 dollars because My  uncle friends worked there. When we finished eating we threw our rubbish in  the bin and we got in the car.
Conclusion Sums up how you felt about the experience.	When I was in the car I said today is one of those days I’ve never had in a million years. When we arrived at home we waited for a few minutes and then we ate dinner. After dinner we drank tea and then we went to sleep.

This is my Recount Scaffold. I had fun making this recount. We used similes,connectives, adjectives, and paragraphs and I understand what paragraphs, Similes, Connectives and Adjectives mean.